Red stained snow

Well, this is one of my Fanfics that is posted on FimFiction.net, and to be honest I will be using deviantART as a testing ground for my stories, anyway if you read and like leave a comment, and if you find things that you want to let me know about, like spelling errors or other stuff I need to work on, do the same thing and I prefer not to flamed, just please don't. you may have to download in order to read but comment all the same.